Angerweather

By itsnotnatural

Sat, 09 Jun 2012
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Left behind
In the mind of troubled times
Two sides
Collide

The Foundation
And Free Will Society

After eons as
Part of an entity

What do they know?

Angerweather forms
For the coming storm
With the birth of an idea
The beginning shall be reborn

I will prepare for these actions
These thoughts will not gain traction
I will not let you make another faction
Angerweather forms

Certificate U
Poem
Part 1: The Great Rebellion
Fantasy

Comments

Submitted by Sooz006 on
The beginning shall be reborn, not sure if it's just me but this line seems to have one syllable too many when you read it aloud. Left behind In the mind of troubled times Two sides Collide The Foundation And Free Will Society After eons as Part of an entity What do they know?... Really liked this half and thought I had it, but then the second half got away from me a bit. I like that the last stanza reads like a mantra.