Friday Sonnet: Silver
By john_silver
Fri, 23 Jan 2009
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No wine these grapes of hurt set free,
No coin is bartered for their taste: my lover,
My friend, you do no longer look at me…
The forging of my fantasies is over:
It’s false I only need you for the mintage
That through my verses (some say) speaks the dream
Which moulds and casts all currencies of language.
I only am a coin lost in a stream,
Which sheds a thread of rust into the flux.
And by that rust they call me poet. Where
Does water end? Where is it she conducts
My rust? And when will I flow where you are
The palm bent concave, like the holy cup,
Which comes amid the reeds and picks me up?...
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Your language is 'Golden'
Permalink Submitted by tamara on
Your language is 'Golden' john_silver.
'I only am a coin lost in a stream,
which sheds a thread of rust into the flux.'
Beautiful work.
From Lynne.
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I am a John_Silver fan.
Permalink Submitted by Geoff Smith on
I am a John_Silver fan. These sonnets are near crystal perfect in their stucture, and a little messy in their imagery. It is as if they have so much to say that they trip themselves up a little and because of that they always come across as genuine and endearing. This is great.
Thanks for reading. I am grateful for your time.
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Hail the king of the
Permalink Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Hail the king of the sonnets!
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