Blue Lights

By jolono

Sat, 12 Nov 2011

3259 reads

12 comments

Blue Lights, siren sound
Moving quickly, thinking,dreaming?
People talking, far away
Seeing colours, distant lights
Stopping now, then moving on
More Lights, higher, brighter
Blurry faces,whispers,whispers
Darkness now, no more colours
Stillness, drowsy, thinking, dreaming?
Movement,taken somewhere, nowhere?
More whispers, then strange noises
Familiar faces, mother, father?
Welcome hands now, touching, feeling
Feel like laughing but not certain
Is this real or thinking, dreaming?
Massive light now, shining beaming
Now its coming,peaceful calm now.

Certificate U

Story

Poems of Life and Love

Spiritual

Comments

I like this- good rhythm...

Permalink Submitted by Highhat on Sun, 2011-11-13 17:22

I like this- good rhythm...

new jolono I to agree with

Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on Mon, 2011-11-14 00:29

new jolono I to agree with same as Highhat. Blue lights And now cherries! julie.

Thanks Julie,only been a

Permalink Submitted by jolono on Mon, 2011-11-14 08:42

Thanks Julie,only been a week but really enjoying the site.

Hi! wow thats amazing and to

Permalink Submitted by sandyshores on Tue, 2011-11-15 14:51

Hi! wow thats amazing and to write so well for a new comer - congratulations!

Thank you Sandy, very new at

Permalink Submitted by jolono on Tue, 2011-11-15 20:33

Thank you Sandy, very new at all this but love to write things down as I think them .

jolono, Rhythm is superb. By

Permalink Submitted by scratch on Fri, 2011-11-18 21:30

jolono, Rhythm is superb. By the way - don't change your profile it's good as it stands. Welcome. Scratch. PS. If this is a 'write down' - thinking without revision, I take my hat off to you Sir/Madam.

Thanks Scratch, it was a

Permalink Submitted by jolono on Sat, 2011-11-19 12:27

Thanks Scratch, it was a "write down", spellings not one of my best points. But think it went down ok. Even when I think I,ve spell checked, always notice something days after and have to edit!

I loved this. the rhyme is

Permalink Submitted by alphadog1 on Thu, 2012-05-03 19:07

I loved this. the rhyme is just great, and the images I have are complete. a philosopher has said that "death is not a part of life" Don't ask me which one... but this covers that experience completely. I found this at a time quite raw, and it has given me a sense of perspective a very well done; and a humble thanks for sharing. take care Andy. PS another thing how come so many of these sites are neat? my page is such a total mess.

Blue Lights

By jolono

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I like this- good rhythm...

new jolono I to agree with

Thanks Julie,only been a

Hi! wow thats amazing and to

Thank you Sandy, very new at

jolono, Rhythm is superb. By

Thanks Scratch, it was a

I loved this. the rhyme is

Cheers Andy, glad you got

This would make a good

Thanks Clinton, long time

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