A Lovely Day
By Jupiter
Fri, 19 Jun 2009
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It could be a lovely day today
So warm, so kind, so good
It could be a lovely day
If all the people understood
The world could heal itself today
No wars, no pain, no greed
The world could heal itself
Just through the planting of a seed
If the people of the world could learn
To think of all they do
In terms of how much hurt they cause
For those who live here too
Then today could be a lovely day
The future could be bright
And instead of being blind
We could be living in the light
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What a lovely poem Jupiter.
Permalink Submitted by sarah wilson on
What a lovely poem Jupiter. Layers of meaning here
"And instead of being blind
We could be living in the light"
This is exactly how I feel about the world - if only.
Sarah x
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And I surely noticed it too
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
And I surely noticed it too and am glad you posted it.
Some admirable sentiment here, Jupiter.
This particular stanza stands out for me. If only...
"If the people of the world could learn
To think of all they do
In terms of how much hurt they cause
For those who live here too"
Tina
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I've just read the above
Permalink Submitted by sarah wilson on
I've just read the above comments and I must say I am very touched by your kind words and reciprocate;)
Sarah x
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Nice one J. Depth and
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Nice one J. Depth and feeling well portrayed - wouldn't be nice?
Chris
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new jupiter this is how I
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new jupiter this is how I exactly
feel and believe.You have put it to-gether
so well papers full lives all exploited about
something or someone.So good hear of some young
and old doing something good.
love the lines When curtains drawn
dark and gloomy it's not the weather!
its what one does with it.I agree with silver-spun-sand lines too.
gods "Light of the world
picture"
I have from market cheap
I asked daughter when small if sees
one bless her got it.
Hymn
.
Peace !is like a river
flowing from the mountain
the wind of the spirit is
blowing everywhere. beautiful.
we seem so disatisfied unyet
some have so much more years
back.correct if spelling wrong
not in dictionary.
julie x me to glad you posted it
could we all march change the world!
they held peace day
other day I couldn't go.
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new Jupiter answered
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Jupiter answered comment. I started
this is how I feel to.At top came up
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new jupiter this is how I feel.
what do they mean.
julie x
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new Jupiter well you asked
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Jupiter well you asked me to let you
know when I put on my story ! "The Chattering Knives and Forks" which is now on ok! tried to do.
all comments very greatful done right away.
thankyou julie x (:-
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I really enjoyed this. It's
I really enjoyed this. It's a beautiful poem. Well done :)
k.
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new jupiter Sorry going must
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new jupiter Sorry going must get on computer. I'll
pray for good weather safe journey take care
Bon Voyage hear from you soon may god watch over you
god bless thanks all your help. yes this got a lot comments.so true!
your friend julie x come back abc soon.(;-
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Hello Jupiter! Looks like
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Hello Jupiter! Looks like we've missed each other! Hope to hear from you soon ;)
Magic xxx
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Mark Heathcote Jupiter,
Permalink Submitted by Mark Heathcote on
Mark Heathcote
Jupiter, those are lovely sentiments enjoy your bright new future and let love and joy follow you in your every step.
Mark Heathcote
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