Cherries (I.P.)
By Kahdai
Thu, 25 Nov 2010
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At fist I thought to myself
if I could get these valued
fruit on my wooden writings
they would make them better
they remain out of my reach
except for two poems I felt
were not a word to my best.
When ii mispelt punctuation
or scrambled proper english
it made no difference since
my heart was in it, meaning
I cannot think word for one
I just like it whyever I do
and it would seem so do you
It would make no difference
not anymore except another,
read and maybe comment now,
I dont mind, go un-noticed,
except by you,! my regulars
few yet reliable and think,
a comment just for me, well
is better than get a cherry
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Hi Kahdai, I love your work
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Hi Kahdai,
I love your work and love the way you express yourself in words.
Jenny.
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There is a good rythmn to
There is a good rythmn to this sweet little poem Kahdai. Well done and thank you for the fine words
;)Pia
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very honest, I was afraid I
very honest, I was afraid I was a bit to honest in my writings, but now I have a companion :) Look forward to reading more of your stuff
Rebecca
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