draft for; dome-life

By Kahdai

Wed, 21 Apr 2010

2 comments

draft 4; domelife

Living in a bubble
child doesn't see

no-ones allowed to know
sun always shines
while outside a tornado
pulls the home away

all they can give is love
now living in the world above

child try to work
not as easy
feed their family
outside the bubble in poverty.

Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on Wed, 2010-04-21 23:43

Really happy you've decided to post these separately, Kahdai! I love the second stanza of this one ;) Magic xxx

Permalink Submitted by Kahdai on Thu, 2010-04-22 21:31

Thanks it was the idea :) , dont really know where am going with this one yet. xxx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "