Lack of regret (I.P.)
By Kahdai
Tue, 16 Nov 2010
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What annoyed me was her lack of regret, after actions that were emotionally driven, quick words thrown away, times gone, chances she missed, people died who she not missed. If I ever once asked her how, she just shrugged that she couldnt go back in time. I could not understand it. Croetine came in door slamming and wailing one morning, so I asked the cat what she was crying hysterically about and he explained well to me, as he usually has to 'Because of her background as a nude model, Croetine was forced to spend an extraordinarily long time as a novice before being allowed to proceed to final vows.' what vows I asked, yet she had grabbed my jacket and gone without explaining.
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Good with a short story from
Good with a short story from your hand Kahdai
well done on the IP
;)Pia
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Love the idea of talking to
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Love the idea of talking to the cat, Kahdai! Gives the piece quite an Alice in Wonderland 'Cheshire Cat' feel :)
Magic xxx
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An interesting short story,
An interesting short story, I love the way the cat just pops up nonchalantly, Hmmm.. I think you could write more stuff like this or expand on this one. it's very good.
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