A Moment between Beats

By Kahdai

Tue, 11 Oct 2011
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When the strength gives up,
the arms let go exhausted,
the anger starts to fade,
and the lullaby to play.

In a moment between beats,
like all those wild beasts,
had to be put down to sleep.

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Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
There is a quiet yearning in this poem, Kahdai. Just beautiful, and its title suits it well. Tina;-)

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Thankyou Tina 'yearning?) mean like really wanting to save them? Glad the title fits :) K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
It seems I have missed quite a bit of your work, there is so much to read here at abc tales. A very poignant poem, that shows a real human side of feelings. Very well put together Kahdai. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Dont worry Jenny iiv missed lods! Thanks for reading some K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "