Painting rainbow reflection

By Kahdai

Wed, 10 Nov 2010
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Now my blood is churning like
breaker waves of my old shore
my head and heart, hands even
arms urging me to paint, this
feelings rushing personality,
changing colours with thought
from mixing greens with blues

I have changed in your moment
the centre of my life capsize
throw me out and fill me with
self hate, regret desperation
all I know now is to run away
hide wherever I can...

excuse random draft:
let the whisper run
down your spine no
reason to shiver

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Submitted by Kahdai on
drafting...

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Kahdai, I love how you use your imagination to change colours. My favourite lines are, Now my blood is churning like breaker waves of my old shore and feelings rushing personality, changing colours with thought. Brilliant. Jenny. x

 

Submitted by shoe on
Beautiful imagery and very emotive, I love the lines Jenny has quoted too, don't change it too much, it's lovely already.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
dont worry its not for changing, just had to stop writing it part way through :/ the colours change is not mood its actually the whole personality! Thankyous both for reading already though :) K xx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by well-wisher on
This is a great poem about being an poet/artist. I like the fact that its full of movement and energy which really conveys well, I think both, emmotion and struggle. I agree with jenny about the first two lines Now my blood is churning like breaker waves of my old shore I also like the centre of my life capsize throw me out and fill me with self hate, regret desperation

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Submitted by Kahdai on
thanks wellwisher :)

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "