Sometimes its a sad song

By Kahdai

Mon, 06 Sep 2010
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8 comments
 

In your eyes,
I see a-ll of you

& the meaning
of your songs
is not in the words,

It's in your eyes
& the te-ars in your voice.

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Comments

Submitted by Highhat on
Sometimes- not 2 ii's Kahdai- watch your proof reading!! Otherwise a lovely poem- so sad . pia

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Short but oh-so beautiful, kahdai! Just a little typo - 'It's' instead of 'its' in the final stanza. :) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Thankyou both very much! Pia, one i is ee sound to me if read it out loud! I think meybe I'v managed a sad and beautiful poem! :D K xxx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by Highhat on
Yes you did Kahdai a very beautiful poem ;) pia

Submitted by Kahdai on
^^

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by Kahdai on
If anyone wanto see the painting: http://browse.deviantart.com/?order=5&q=tears#/d2yf4ao Kahdai

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by Highhat on
lovely painting Kahdai ;) pia xx

Submitted by Kahdai on
thanks its one of my rare lefty ones :) K xx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "