Beachcomber's Love Song To The Sea
By Kilb50
Wed, 15 Sep 2010
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His sea trilby
tethered with rope,
hair threaded with
underwater green.
His sea breeches,
a silvery shade of brown
(fish-skin perhaps)
washed by coral-fronds.
His sea box containing
seven tiny shells
each dipped and pointed
with a dab of ocean black.
His beach drum, speckled
with fin and claw -
an ocean diviner
a Neptune-dowser,
braised with fish oil
and kelp.
His love song to the sea:
an imitation of regret
a wave-hymn from his
darkest fathoms
for all that has been
consumed and washed ashore.
His loneliness:
starlight on water -
a love of sea and
the intimacy of memory
the wonder he senses
looking out to beyond.
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Hi Kib50, You capture the
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Kib50,
You capture the scene so well.
Enjoyed reading this little ditty.
Jenny.
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As Jennifer says, a scene -
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
As Jennifer says, a scene - perfectly captured. My favourite lines:-
"His beach drum, speckled
with fin and claw -
an ocean diviner
a Neptune-dowser,"
Tina
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Lovely images, each couplet
Lovely images, each couplet concise and perfect.
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Hello there Kilb50. Dipping
Hello there Kilb50.
Dipping into your tales and picked this one.
Appealed to me as I live overlooking the sea.
I'm positive I have seen him on the beach.
Regards
ScoZen
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