At Last

By lenchenelf

Wed, 05 Jan 2011

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10 comments

You said, at last, your chance to wear a big hat,
choice of colour,
generational mood of the bride's mother;

but all I could vision
was dressing your hair in sunbeams and starlight.

All twinkle and merriment, brilliant as diamond
compressed from the carbon of hearts.

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Hi lenchenelf, what a

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Wed, 2011-01-05 16:06

Hi lenchenelf, what a beautiful description you have written here, love the lines: but all I could vision was dressing your hair in sunbeams and starlight. Thanks for a great read. Jenny.

I Like this, yes, lovely.

Permalink Submitted by shoe on Wed, 2011-01-05 18:52

I Like this, yes, lovely.

I really like this too!

Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on Thu, 2011-01-06 08:53

I really like this too!

Thank you Jennifer, Shoe &

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Thu, 2011-01-06 09:32

Thank you Jennifer, Shoe & IPFNH, delighted that you like it :-) Ps. I look daft in big hats :-) all the best Lena xx

new lenchenelf A little

Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on Thu, 2011-01-06 09:40

new lenchenelf A little cracker,I wouldn't minded a hat like that,vision of starlight and diamonds in her hair,compressed carbon of hearts. Mine at daughter's beautiful lilac,but covered my face. Happy new year. x cavalcader julie xx

Thanks Julie, much

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Thu, 2011-01-06 09:56

Thanks Julie, much appreciated :-) atb Lena xx

Small and beautifully

Permalink Submitted by fatboy74 on Fri, 2011-01-07 17:34

Small and beautifully formed. :-)

Thank you very much FB74 :-)

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Sun, 2011-01-09 08:15

Thank you very much FB74 :-) atb Lena xx

Wonderful - especially the

Permalink Submitted by rjnewlyn on Sat, 2011-01-15 01:10

Wonderful - especially the way it bursts into freedom in the second two stanzas. Rob

Thanks Rob, really

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Sat, 2011-01-15 11:34

Thanks Rob, really appreciate your comment atb Lenaxx

At Last

By lenchenelf

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Hi lenchenelf, what a

I Like this, yes, lovely.

I really like this too!

Thank you Jennifer, Shoe &

new lenchenelf A little

Thanks Julie, much

Small and beautifully

Thank you very much FB74 :-)

Wonderful - especially the

Thanks Rob, really

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