To Me, My Family Is...

By lilyallenfan

Tue, 25 Sep 2012
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To me, my family is a group of loving people,
To me, my family are my home,
To me, my family are the ones I know I can trust,
To me, my family are the ones I will love, cherish
and take with me all through my life.
My family feel like love,
My family remind me of good times,
My family make me feel special and cared for

Certificate U
Poem
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by ScoZen on
Nice one lil. Give them a hug for me. Regards
ScoZen

Submitted by lilyallenfan on
Thanks scozen for your comment :)

Submitted by Sooz006 on
This is so sweet, innocent and truthful. Lovely poem.

 

Submitted by Mark Heathcote on
Nice one!

Mark Heathcote

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
A lovely tribute to your family, lily;-)

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Have a look at your tense- My family is/are? which one do you want? I think it is 'is'. give them a hug from me too and tell them to give you a hug from me.. ;)Pia

Submitted by lilyallenfan on
thank you Sooz, Mark, Silver Spun Sand and Pia. You are so nice to comment and help me. thank you :)

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Lily, this was such a comforting and loving poem, which made me feel all warm inside to read. Like Silver Spun Sand said, this was a great tribute to your parents. Keep enjoying writing. Jenny.