Tipping the Waiter
By littleditty
Thu, 06 Nov 2008
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Since she lost your arms
she is finding furniture quite supportive.
Asked to dine by the table,
shown to her seat by the chair,
she converses with the salt;
peppers hot topics on the napkin of the one not there.
Another smiling waitress opens a can of laughter,
and unarmed, not even by a notebook,
asks her to leave the Menu
while her dinner cooks.
She knows to leave the flower,
for the woman who dines alone
may read a candle-lit fable to the table,
raising a glass to the rose.
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Sad, surreal and
Sad, surreal and excellent.
There is some particularly nice writing in this:
'peppers hot topics', 'candle lit-fable to the table'
to name just two.
Well-maintained image of the solitary diner.
Really liked this one.
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'Sad, surreal and excellent'
Permalink Submitted by capoeiragem on
'Sad, surreal and excellent' just about sums it up, a beautifully written piece :)
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littleditty at her surreal
Permalink Submitted by luigi_pagano on
littleditty at her surreal best. Magnifico.
Luigi x
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When dining alone, always
When dining alone, always take a newspaper, or a good book.
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The first two lines sucked
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
The first two lines sucked me right into this poem and happen to be my favourite. The entire piece was a joy to read!
Magic xxx
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