A tolerant society
By Louise178
Mon, 27 Jun 2011
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this plastic bag is biodegradable
just like you and me
and my name is not Jacqui
no freakiness here
just a little difficulty
so your song maybe loud
but I like the attention
if I am honest
and my plastic life
well it's fine it's alright
orange red bright yellow blue
all my shiny colours
they scream at you
speed sun and you run
but I am not here
so catch your life
as it turns quickly now
screeching down the hill
wildly out of control
hit the brakes
oh no too late !
and the wind catches another
biodegradable plastic bag
high up on a hill in the lakes.
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this plastic bag is
this plastic bag is biodegradable
just like you and me
I like these opening lines and the philosophical metaphor you use here.
Nice poem
;)Pia
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I like this particularly the
I like this particularly the ending which is excellent - well done Jacqui. ATB Fatboy
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