our love

By rachel1712

Wed, 09 Jul 2014
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Our love
you are my sun, and i am your moon
our love transcends to the heavens 
reaching the stars above
our hearts beat like doves flapping their wings
so  majestic and beautiful
like our love 
my life without you would be an empty existence 
no hope nor would i dare to dream
love like ours shines bright against the evil in this world

 

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Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

There's nothing better than love and I so enjoyed the words in your poem.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by God'sPoeticChild on

The last line in your poem was very powerful. Great work. Short and straight to the point. 

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