Circumstances

By MAGAMED.MT

Fri, 13 Jun 2014
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Rolling thunder
Growling hunger
Thrown asunder
“Where are you going in life boy?”
Sunny November
Green Cucumber
Come together
“Great work my dear boy!”

 

 

Certificate 15
Poem
Philosophy

Comments

Submitted by Raef_Boylan on

This is an intriguing piece, feels like a puzzle to put together. I'm not sure if there's a sexual joke in there or just my mind messing around but it's entertaining. Feels like a huge chunk of life story summarised succinctly, from being questioned to being perceived as successful. Nice one.

Submitted by MAGAMED.MT on

I see the sexual joke, hah. It's moreso about how different circumstances may affect your personal life, but you have the power of influincing it in a way which would be for your better or not. The idea came to me when I saw a homeless man lying on the ground with the widest smile on his face. smiley

Thank you for your comment, it was very beneficial.