Rigor
By maisie
Tue, 06 Mar 2012
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The moment we are rigid,
we fail to be. Instant coffee.
A chipped cup, a moment's silence
held forever in your look. Light
the birds chorus in full swing,
each wing spread. The Night-Jar
ajar, clutched cloaked in a hedge.
.
The rigidity of the human condition
fails us, we are not able to function
in uncertainity. Safely cossetted
in Nature's clutch, we bid goodbye
to childhood.
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Very good little poem, I
Very good little poem, I love this bit;
'The Night-Jar
ajar, clutched cloaked in a hedge.
Scrummy!
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Cracking job Maisie, Shoe
Cracking job Maisie, Shoe has already mentioned what stood out for me.
Dan.
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