Struggling
By mark p
Sat, 03 Nov 2018
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Struggling
In the Seventies
I walked with you
Down to school
Struggling to keep up
As I was small.
In your Seventies
I walked without you
Up to the hospice
Struggling to keep up
With your decline.
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Sad reflection of how time
Permalink Submitted by hilary west on
Sad reflection of how time passes and the sadness it brings !
Hilary
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This is such a sad relevant
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This is such a sad relevant poem of life and aging.
Jenny.
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So sad and so clever, we don
Permalink Submitted by Jane Hyphen on
So sad and so clever, we don't really need to know about the bit in between.
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