Lots Of Feathered Friends

By mcscraic

Sun, 21 Mar 2021
  • 459 reads
2 comments
 

 

Lots Of Feathered Friends

By Paul McCann

, 

 

Cockatoo one talked

Cockatoo two squawked .

Cockatoo one flew .

 

Kookaburras came .

Kookaburras sat  .

Kookaburras two .

 

There’s one , two and three

galahs on a tree

pink faced and silly .

 .

See the four Emu’s  .

Under the gum tree..

Running round crazy .

 

One , two , three,. four, five

whip birds in the sun

whistling through the scrub .  .

 

The six magpies sat

on an old tin roof ,

of an a outback pub.

 

Seven cockatiels

hiding from the sun

on a summers day .

 

Eight willie wagtails

running here and there

they’ve all lost their way .

 

Nine noisy miners

kicking up a storm  

looking for a nest

 

Ten tiny finches

flirting on a branch

they’ve no where to rest .  

.

 

Certificate U
Poem
poemsbypaulmccann
Nature

Comments

Submitted by Penny4athought on

I can see this as a picture book for young children. I think each stanza with a picture to illustrate your words going from 1 to 10 would be beautiful too. If I may ask ,on the last line, did you mean to say, "They've no where to rest?". Enjoyed the flow annd imagry of this poem very much.smiley

Penny4athought

Submitted by mcscraic on

Lovely encouraging comment Penny . I did mean to edit that word thanks for the reminder .

I'm sure there would be a place for  this in a  book .

How wonderful that would be .

Kind regards

Paul