In Sickness And In Health
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In Sickness and Health
ByPaul McCann
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Pain
Unbearable, Troubled
Suffering Wounded, Untreated
Sadness, Burden, Caress Happy
Healed, eased, relaxed,
Normality, Healthy
Comfort .
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Footnote'
This poem is a Diamentine Structure and the defination of that is as follows
A seven line poem where the theme or topic of the poem ends opposite to the opening topic. English grammar is used and the rules are as follows;
Line 1 -
Name (Noun) Theme/Object
Line 2 -
Two adjectives describing the noun in line 1.
Line 3 -
Three participles (-ing or -ed), relating to line 1 and 2 of the poem.
Line 4 -
Four nouns (2 referring to the noun in line 1 and the other 2 referring to line 7).
Line 5 -
Three participles (relating to noun in line 7)
Line 6 -
Two adjectives (describing the noun in line 7)
Line 7 -
Noun (names the Theme or object which is the opposite of the noun in line 1.
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