Silver and Exact
By nicola6
Tue, 23 Aug 2011
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In the dip of mirror,
The long line of a bone
Follows the slow blink of lid,
Costly skin draws tight across the
Rise and fall of brow
Unfurrowed. Lips retreat to
Lisping and the soft bulb
Solves all for now.
In the fog of mirror
The blunt finger clears
A space where plump lips
Draw back over neat teeth,
Enamel catching the
Evening’s glow from the hall
And the drone of a fan
An accompaniment
To the tick tock -
A foreshortening where
The dark wormhole of the eye
Leeches light to another mirror,
Silver and exact.
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I've only recently read the
I've only recently read the Plath one, (good isn't it!)
this is V. nicely done.
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So very Plath - excellent
So very Plath - excellent (hers and yours). Really well done.
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