Crematorium
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By poetjude
Fri, 05 Jun 2009
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Is this everything -
your name printed on paper
two bunches of flowers
and thirty-one people with your genes?
Stories don't live on a string of DNA.
Near Reykjavik, wildflowers grew on your war tales;
the eyes that saw them are now part of the air
and the ears that they told will be ruptured.
How much loss can flesh still tolerate -
until our own have followed us, into the quiet
of this place? I know it well - that printed name,
the flowers on the half moon terrace
when the flowers of Iceland will be gone.
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This is stunning! Some
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
This is stunning! Some beautiful images, my favourite being;
'Stories don't live on a string of DNA.
Near Reykjavik, wildflowers grew on your war tales;'
Also loved the line;
'and thirty-one people with your genes?'
A wonderful read and one I thank you for!
Magic xxx
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Ditto the previous comments;
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Ditto the previous comments; 'stunning'.
Chris
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