Environment

By pom99

Fri, 19 Dec 2014
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20 feet from the top,

From where you stand,

The rows of neat, weather coated apartments

and the glazed windows reflect progress.

5 feet from where I stand,

I see a dying river,

and some empty nests,

whispering ghost stories to the wind. 

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Comments

Submitted by celticman on

empty nest a winter's rest. Nice one. 

 

Submitted by pom99 on

Thank you for the feedback. 

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Nice contrast between the manmade and the natural.

Submitted by pom99 on

Thanks for the feedback. I am glad you like it.