Silence has descended
By rachel1712
Fri, 09 May 2014
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Silence has descended upon us,
not even a mouse scurries about,
no wind outside howling,
no eerie screams shrieking,
not even the chatter of people in street,
silence has taken hold,
no- one can escape it,
no- one can fight it,
the world empty without sound,
isn't a world worth living in.
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Perhaps consider changing
Perhaps consider changing "scurried" to 'scurries' in the second line of this enchanting poem. Well done.
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