what if you took a chance

By rachel1712

Fri, 09 May 2014
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What if the world died tomorrow,

would you regret the life you have lived?,
would you look back at your past?,
would you be proud?,
What if you never took a chance at life,
would you accept the challenge and risk,
to make the future better and brighter,
what if you never lived the life you wanted,
would you take a second chance,
to change your fate,
would you start anew.

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Submitted by God'sPoeticChild on

This is good. But, my ceative writing teacher gave me advice on when I ask to many questions in a poem. She said when you have questions, answer them in a poem. See how your peam sounds then. Just a little advice that I'm passing on. :) 

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