The Broken Heart

By randy-johnson

Fri, 31 Dec 2021
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I'm shocked and it's hard for me to believe.
My fiancee has left me on New Year's Eve.
I thought she loved me and it's hard for me to understand.
My fiancee said goodbye and she ran off with another man.
I was good to her and there is something I've come to regret.
She convinced me to mortgage my home and buy her a brand new Corvette.
She left me and it has broken my heart and reduced me to tears.
After this, I know that it will be impossible to enjoy the new year.
She ran off with that man in the Corvette that I bought.
I hope she and her lover will suffer, I hope they will rot.
She was supposed to marry me and give me a life time of happiness.
That wicked witch played me like a fiddle and now I'm so depressed.
When she ran off in the car that I bought, she added insult to injury.
My poor heart is broken and as I enter the new year, I'll be in misery.
 

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Comments

Submitted by donignacio on

That is heartbreaking and very well written. 

 

Submitted by Hades502 on

Hey Randy, I don't know how true this is, or if it is entirely fiction. Some of your stuff seems to be your own thoughts or feelings when you write, but I haven't read everything of yours. If true, my condolences and you are better off without her. Also, only ever use a mortgage to help you pay for the house itself, in my humble opinion. It's good not to owe money. Trust me, that was my downfall once upon a time (owing money, not buying girls corvettes). Interesting piece.

GGHades502

Submitted by Tom Brown on

Serves her right you're probably better off eccept now for the money that's Ouch. School fees.

Lots of fishes in the sea! If you get drunk they look better. You've got enough reason I'd say.

All the best and Randy for the New Year 2022!