Only Words …

By Rhiannonw

Fri, 19 May 2023
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2 comments
 

Gushing, rushing talk, talk,
walk away from work, shirk
obligations,
short-term
gain, fame. 

Hush!

Duties fulfilled, 
continuance, perseverance
solid foundation,
fulfilling,
small but steady remuneration,
weary, no fame
but long-term
satisfaction.

All hard work brings a profit,
but mere talk leads only to poverty. Proverbs (Bible Book)14:23

[IP: pick an idiom, adage or proverb and base a story or poem on it.]

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Comments

Submitted by marandina on

"Gushing, rushing, talk, talk,

walk away from work, shirk.."

 

Those first two lines give energy to the rest of the poem. Lots of carefully placed wording means a nicely crafted IP response, Rhiannon. Paul 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Paul. I do appreciate your thoughtful reading. Rhiannon