Semi-nonsense Consonance

By Rhiannonw

Thu, 21 Jan 2016
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12 comments
 

A tribute to the attributes
attributed that day
to the tribune, in the tribunal
which studied the affray
of tribulation, trouble
in the tribe that lived
far down
along the tributary,
where turbulent brutality
had spread,
and battle bravery, cool head
and kindness
turned violence to tolerance
and beneficent benefit
instead.

[IP: tribute]

 

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Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

WOW...Rhiannon...such a lovely play on words, as Peter Piper might have saidsmiley  Such an original and wry take on the IP.

Tina

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Tina. Not thinking of a direct verse on the IP, these 'similar' words kept burbling around in my head, and gradually working together! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by loquaciousicity on

Wonderful word play, Rhiannon... lovin' it!!

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank, Terry. I thought you'd enjoy the play on words! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by celticman on

something of penny picked a pickled pepper tongue twister to this. 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Celt, I nearly titled it 'tongue twister'! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Rhiannon

I'll bet you had a lot of fun writing this. It is so clever, how you take a word, and stretch and turn it and fiddle with it until she make a story out of it.

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Jean. Yes, I did, and was surprised how many words came to mind and sort-of fitted together too. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by maisie on

very much enjoyed!

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Maise. I'm pleased about that! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Granny to the r... on

Excellent word game. Makes my clown face turn into a smile.

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

That's nice to know! Thanks, glad you enjoyed the fun! Rhiannon