Tangled Threads
By Rhiannonw
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Not long ago
when mail was slow
across the ocean waters
(and phone costs high
in days gone by)
communication’s steady flow
of parted love
was written out by hand,
no back-up record
on disc or laptop stored,
– and so they had to keep
a diary note
of when and what they wrote,
to keep connecting things they shared,
ensuring missives sent
were then correctly paired
with those replies received,
for overlap and time delay
could make each other seem to say
odd answers to befuddle,
and when aware of heightening muddle
they’d have to try to disentangle
the scrambled threads,
by maybe sending further letters.
which must again criss-cross the ocean waters:
and wait again – time to forget the date
to which this answer must relate … .
And even inland, in Britain:–
I too once found incomprehension
when letter threads of conversation
were causing blank confusion,
but happily we readily reached
an accurate conclusion
– one letter had not reached its destination –
into a rural post-box dropped,
and maybe lay forgotten, stuck,
its journey stopped,
but after quite a while, one day,
that missing jigsaw piece plopped through,
the letter box in his doorway.
[This week's IP: Letters]
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You have all the ingredients
You have all the ingredients in this poem for the IP Rhiannon. I think letter writing is so important, it's such a shame people don't write those special words down on paper anymore.
Jenny.
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a lovely response to the IP
a lovely response to the IP Rhiannon. Emails are great for speed and ease, but there is something special about a letter
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Times gone by. Nicely picked
Times gone by. Nicely picked-up Rhiannon.
Parson Thru
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This lovely poem is our
This lovely poem is our facebook/twitter pick of the day - please link and share if you like it too.
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The letter was such a
The letter was such a different animal to the modern forms of communication. You've described here so well the processes and pitfalls as well as the artfulness of letter writing Rhiannon.
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it's all rock & roll to me
Elvis said, I write but my letter keeps on coming back, she wrote upon it, return to sender, address unkown, no such number, no such zone.
A love letter should be written pen on paper and in your own hand, as through the ages.
Nice, (retro) nostaligic! Nolan &&
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This is an excellent take on
This is an excellent take on the I.P., Rhiannon. Congratulations on the poem being chosen as 'pick of the day'. Well done.
Best, Luigi x
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This is brilliant Rhiannon
This is brilliant Rhiannon much deserving of the Pick. Reads so nicely too, lovely rhythm.
Linda
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