Grass
By samhennig
Wed, 23 Mar 2011
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There is grass between my bare toes,
there is heat on the back of my neck,
and your sweaty hand is resting in my sweaty hand, but neither of us let go.
That is all,
nothing is spectacular.
There are brown, brick buildings in all directions.
There are trees in cages,
there are children playing on the swings.
The grass tickles my legs as we lie down.
We have not loosened our grip,
and we both smile,
it is spectacular.
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I really like this, I have
I really like this, I have some similar themes in some of my poems. I really like the 'trees in cages'
highly possible right
let me know if youd like to read some of mine
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I agree with the above -
I agree with the above - this has a lovely flow and `feel' to it.
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I really really like this
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I really really like this sam
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Hi samhennig, I got a
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi samhennig,
I got a brilliant picture here of a hot summers day
in a park, you painted a beautiful picture with
words.
Thanks for the read.
Jenny.
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I like it. interesting
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I like it. interesting imagery.
"If I send you post-cards from the side of the road: photographs of movies, and hearts about to implode" - Elliott Smith
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