Fob watch

By ScoZen

Fri, 26 Aug 2011
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12 comments
 

next to
my skin
a silver
fob watch

each tick
a heart beat
reminds me
of you

time check
your photo
there smiling
oblivious to

your countdown
your unwinding
running out
of time

the hours
minutes
seconds
the prayer's

Certificate U
Poetry with L plates on.
Love

Comments

Submitted by fatboy74 on
'oblivious to your countdown your unwinding...' liked this a lot scozen. :-)

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
Thanks for your time in reading fb. ps. I was looking back through your tales for one about a circus, but can't find it?
ScoZen

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
yes, I too thought liked it, so succinct, and to the point, and reminding to each of us. Rh

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
Thanks Rhiannonw. I'm about to dip back into your nature tales for another read, relaxing.
ScoZen

Submitted by celticman on
good beat to it.

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
Would you believe it celticman? I was waiting for the 64 Auchenshugle bus and when it turned up late I lodged a complaint. The driver said my fob watch was crap... Do you him by any chance?
ScoZen

Submitted by L G Meadows on
One of my favorite subjects, time. Enjoyed the poem.

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
Apology for late reply LGM. Time, never seems to be enough of it.
ScoZen

Submitted by lenchenelf on
Measuring life in its mechanism. Nice :-) all the best Lena xx

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
A late thanks to you little elf for reading. "...all the best..." same to you.
ScoZen

Submitted by ScoZen on
Opps, pressed button twice.
ScoZen

Submitted by L G Meadows on
Fascinating subject, time.