Infinite sky

Cherry

By ScoZen

Sat, 22 Dec 2012
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16 comments
 

I watch
as they rise
shrouded in mist
a thousand or more
towards an infinite sky
tinged with soft grey
and warm pink
heading south
I guess

Certificate U
Poetry with L plates on.
Unclassified

Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Nice one, ScoZen...and 'honk, honk', yourself;-) Sandlady

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
I'm always pleased to have your support sandlady, so a thank you. ps Has your cherry necklace arrived yet via Mr T Cooks "...shameless plug..." for a certain shop in Exeter?
ScoZen

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
I enjoyed this too. Simple and evocative. I guess the geese must really feel the sky infinite! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
Thanks Rhiannonw. ps. I need to escape back into your nature tales for some therapy.
ScoZen

Submitted by The Talisman on
To use words from the previous comments. Simply, nice. Good luck.

Submitted by ScoZen on
Thanks for taking time to read Talisman
ScoZen

Submitted by scratch on
Love it ScoZen. Exquisite.

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
Hello scratch nice to hear from you and thanks for your comment. ps Are you going to post a Comp entry, go on
ScoZen

Submitted by jolono on
Really nice Scozen. Good luck and Merry Christmas.

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
I missed your Christmas wishes jolono. So in arrears, the same to you, and have a good New year. Regards.
ScoZen

Submitted by celticman on
I see the words form an arrow. I once wrote a story in the shape of a xmas tree (I think I got an d for it). But I like yours. I'll give you an A. But I see you've been cheating and had another attempt so B1-

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
You're so harsh celticman. Anyway, I was trying to be smart arsed when posting this, I went for a vee shape but some how it didn't work. May try again for a B1+
ScoZen

Submitted by Denzella on
Hello again, This too is an excellent entry. You have created an image with so few words. I really enjoyed this too. Good luck once again. Moya
 

Submitted by ScoZen on
A late thanks to you Moya. It's all been good fun this little comp. Best wishes
ScoZen

Submitted by ScoZen on
A late thanks to you Moya. It's all been good fun this little comp. Best wishes
ScoZen

Submitted by ScoZen on
Dear Ed, I have to say I am overwhelmed with my recent collection of cherries. Many thanks. Brian.
ScoZen