In the manner of Haiku.

By ScoZen

Mon, 09 May 2011
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10 comments
 

Tattoo shop.

Sharp to the point
vivid colours flow

A lover erased
a flower remains

Skin plays dancing scene
the last waltz.

Beach.

Urban gulls queue
for chips

A cormorant hangs
out to dry

Red kite surfer jousts
with sea gulls

Coast path.

Way post buffed
by passing hands

Call of nature
wall ferns wilt

Coats of sheep and
pony hang on fence

Certificate U
Poetry with L plates on.
Miscellaneous

Comments

Submitted by celticman on
'A lover erased, a flower remains' That's my favourite bit.

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
Thanks celticman. ps Still at your tales Harley St and Huts.
ScoZen

Submitted by maisie on
you have some lovely bits, the one above.... and well yes most of it, :) thanks!

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!

Submitted by ScoZen on
A thank you Maisie for reading.
ScoZen

Submitted by Highhat on
I like "urban gulls queue for chips" Great ScoZen- hej hilsen ;)Pia

Submitted by ScoZen on
Pia. Tak og haber du er godt
ScoZen

Submitted by fatboy74 on
my favourite also although way post buffed by passing hands is rather wonderful. Really good Scozen :-)

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
Thanks fb for your time in reading. ps Many a time I have walked the wrong path because the way has been erased.
ScoZen

Submitted by shoe on
I love these little snippets of poetry, truly an art.

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
Hello and thanks shoe. I'm learning this style, but? "...truly an art..." thats debatable, a long way to go yet.
ScoZen