I don't like porridge
By seashore
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My mother carries the sheets into the kitchen. Her face is stiff, her mouth a thin line. She walks right by me, her invisible child. My father is eating his porridge. He ignores me too.
I have committed a crime.
My brother joins my father at the breakfast table. My mother fusses around him and brings him a big dish of porridge which he eats making disgusting slurping noises. My brother loves porridge.
Still nobody speaks to me. My punishment, apart from the silence, is that I have no breakfast to eat. I mind the silence but not the porridge, which makes me heave.
All this because I have wet the bed. I am five years old, and for the rest of my life I will hate porridge.
Funny how my parents never knew that.
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I like the sparsity of words
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I'm also a fan of sparsity,
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A perfect example of less
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new seashore Congrats: on
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This is brilliant seashore.
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I agree with insert - the
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Seashore. "...he eats
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What a fantastic opening,
TVR
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What a fantastic opening,
TVR
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So well - written, so
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God this is effective, such
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Good morning coral, isn't it
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Very nice, interesting, to
Sav
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Sorry but I did miss it
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I am on my way to waitrose
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