I Hide

By Sharmi

Sun, 03 Feb 2013
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5 comments
 

There is something inside
Therefore I hide
My eyes are wide in fear
As I await to see
Something I’ve never seen before
My fingers tremble in terror
As I reach to touch
Something I’ve never felt before
And then..
My heart misses a beat
I freeze and I sweat
I see what is inside
It is real, it is alive
A wild beastly surprise
That thing that hides inside
Is all that I feared it would be
It wears a disguise
Behind the disguise, is the real me

Certificate U
Poetry
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Comments

Submitted by nerdquirk42 on
Very nice! I'm not much of a poet myself, so I really admire you for taking steps toward something that you - at least to me - don't seem as comfortable writing in.

Submitted by Highhat on
I like the way poetry can be very personal and even private sometimes. Congratualtions with your new venture- I wish you good fortune with it. ;)Pia

Submitted by celticman on
I like this Sharmi. As a non-poet I don't know if you need the 'the real' in the last line. cf Behind the disguise is me.

 

Submitted by Sharmi on
Thank you nirdquirk, Pia and celticman for reading my not so perfect poem. And thank you also for the suggestions. I need to rewrite it:)

Sharmi

Submitted by ScoZen on
"...There is something inside Therefore I hide..." I believe we all hide something dear Sharmi.
ScoZen