number 4

By shisaa

Tue, 22 Nov 2011

2 comments

Like a thorn left from a brush with a rose,
an irritation remains.
This silent contempt of calm
returns unrest to equilibrium
and leaves me

Permalink Submitted by scratch on Tue, 2011-11-22 22:41

Well shisaa, That's quite disturbing. Intentional or not? Somehow I liked it. Well done.

Permalink Submitted by shisaa on Wed, 2011-11-23 11:06

Thanks. I think intentional yes, its meant to communicate a sense of discontent.