Dear Diary ...
By Silver Spun Sand
Mon, 08 Nov 2010
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Dank, dark and drizzly
this November afternoon;
I break off from my scribbling
and look out my window
at the moor – thin, ribbons
of mist haphazardly rise
from a far-flung stream.
Reminds me of my half-smoked
cigarette, smouldering in an ashtray;
memory, not so hot, not these days.
Brush some wayward wisps
of grey from my eyes
and the curtain lifts
as silent as time.
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love the imagery in this
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
love the imagery in this oneTina
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Dark, dank and drizzly,
Dark, dank and drizzly, couldn't be put better than this - well done and congrats on cherries. :-)
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Lovely imagery and mood
Lovely imagery and mood catching, evokes those grey days we all know so well!
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Hi Tina, I love the lines
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Tina,
I love the lines thin, ribbons of mist haphazardly
rise from a far-flung stream, in connection with.
Reminds me of my half-smoked cigarette, smouldering
in an ashtray, what an imagination you have.
Simply beautiful. Congratulations on the cherries.
Jenny. xxx
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This is lovely ,Tina x
This is lovely ,Tina x Really captures a moment of reflection x:)
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Concise but absolutely
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Concise but absolutely packed with brilliant and beautiful images, Tina! Very well done on a well-deserved cherry ;)
Magic xxx
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I want to leave a comment
I want to leave a comment too. Captures the November mood very well Tina- like the part about the curtain lifting as silent as time. Very well done. Hope you didn't sit with an open window you may catch a cold!!!
cheers
Pia ;)
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Great time for scribbling :)
Great time for scribbling :) novembre, here a cold clear day today though! Your last four lines are best for me, I liked the whole thing K xx
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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I like that saying, it would
I like that saying, it would be funny, all the lonly people could scoop up a cat or dog, take it in warm and dry and feed it :) K
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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