The Fallen

By Silver Spun Sand
Sun, 08 Nov 2009
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I bought a pack
of poppy seeds;
prepared their bed
so carefully,
but summer-long
none showed –
not one bonny
black-eyed face.
Instead,
they grew,
in a place
of their choosing
not of mine...
Amidst
the shingle
and the shale
where kindred seeds
blithely fell;
where nothing else
could survive,
they sprung alive.
Nodding
in the wind;
a barbed-wire fence,
no deterrent – still
they multiply
in crimson splendour
saying, ‘Yes,’
to liberty –
to freedom.
The more uphill the fight,
the more they thrive,
the more I will
remember them.
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This is beautiful,Tina. I
This is beautiful,Tina. I really enjoyed. A wonderful contribution to Remembrance Sunday!
I love the last lines:
'where nothing else
could survive,
they sprung alive.'
xx
k.
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This is beautiful Tina - and
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This is beautiful Tina - and a beauty I think I've seen before? But that might be my sleep-deprived brain ;) Poppies will always be my favourite flower and I always love any poem in which they are included! This also has a very important message that I'm glad you're sharing.
Magic xxx
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This is a lovely poem x I
This is a lovely poem x
I love the lines "The more uphill the fight, the more they thrive"
So true of life...
Thanks :)
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That's a big improvement. I
That's a big improvement. I sometimes feel with your poetry that it's just too direct - I think it needs a little more mystery sometimes, a bit more innuendo, more of a hint than a tell - and this has now achieved that.
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