Poetry Sucks...
By Silver Spun Sand
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I ditch my pen and paper...
go outside...sick and tired
of trying to write. Water
in the fields lies deep
in brown-frowning furrows
where two lapwings sit
and contemplate
the nature of things.
Trenchant spikes
of bulrush stand tall
in my pond – overflowing
its banks . A kind of foreboding
pervades, as if winter hides
her imminent tirade
that, doubtless,
will end in tears
and the grey clouds
match my mood – two
shades darker, the green
of a eucalyptus
and the stubborn umber
of the buckthorn.
Something stirs,
something breathes,
and trembling thighs
of the white-barked
silver-birches kiss desire
from a fractious sky –
court a redolent wind.
Likewise, the lapwings
rise...ride the glorious
long spine of a thought-train
regardless of rhythm
or rhyme; all is hushed
save for murmurings
of the trees; poetry
indeed.
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Brilliant, Tina. Such a well
Brilliant, Tina. Such a well-deserved pick of the week. Sounds like you tapped into your muse. Your standard is always high, but you have found something else here. I adore the trembling thighs of the white-barked silver-birches and I know precisely what you mean. We have full-on fecundity tree growing right opposite. Brilliantly caught and wonderfully rendered. Really enjoyed reading and will now bookmark. xx
Parson Thru
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Hi Tina, just had to come
Hi Tina, just had to come back and say I'm so glad this was made poem of the week, it's so well deserved and is a real treasure. 'Simply Beautiful!' Jenny.
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Very nice, Tina, as always...
Very nice, Tina, as always...
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