"Pretty Bubbles in the Air"
By Silver Spun Sand
Tue, 15 Feb 2011
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Like a string of dancing bubbles,
words drift into my mind
kaleidoscope colours, carry on the wind.
I would cup my hands; capture them.
Only, I can’t. The cat, blithely jumps
onto the kitchen table
where I am trying to write, and
upstairs – the kids, fighting...again.
They thunder downstairs – daughter
buries her face in my lap, and
my son skulks and sobs, fit to burst,
saying she called him a ‘scaredy-cat’
and she, that he’d called her a ‘wuss’
first, and something else...far worse.
I tell them, ‘five minutes to tea’,
to stop it...or else, and to, please, wash up.
The moment is past – the bubbles burst,
and the soap stings my eyes.
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Really your bubbles didn't
Really your bubbles didn't burst well they did burst into a great little piece of work here- great poem Tina- so realistic.
;)Pia
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I have all of this to come
I have all of this to come Tina and they've already started at 2 and 4. Lovely snaphot this. :-)
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Puts me well in mind of the
Puts me well in mind of the old song and a fine piece to read for my return.
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I agree with fatboy Tina - a
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I agree with fatboy Tina - a lovely snapshot
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Tina, I think this is a
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Tina,
I think this is a great description of family
life, you summed everything up so well. It reminded
me of Christmas spent with my partners family, how
children squabble, but soon make up very quickly.
Jenny.
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I love this, Tina - my two
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I love this, Tina - my two are exactly the same, and my writing tends to go on the back-burner most days while I play negotiator in their little fall-outs. Could relate to this no end and I'm sure plenty of other parents could too! Very much enjoyed - your lovely poem, not the arguements ;oD
Rachel xx
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