Seen From a Window
By Silver Spun Sand
Fri, 09 Mar 2012
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Her footsteps fall –
soft as a bird’s
skitter on the sands;
the subtle slope
of her shoulders –
speaks to me of pagodas,
and her face
a rosebud –
fresh sprung;
opening to the sun.
Those eyes, the greenest
of things blue, almost
meet mine, almost
every time...
and I breathe deep;
half in disappointment –
half in reluctant relief.
Whether she be good
or bad...a princess, or
a pauper – a matter
for conjecture...
It seems she wafts
with the wind,
and like the wind,
I know not
where she’s from,
nor where she goes.
Would I were a leaf
on the tree, opposite
my window, for then
I’d fall at her feet...
and tag along.
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"Those eyes the greenest of
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
"Those eyes the greenest
of things blue"
- love this image, Tina. And that final stanza is just stunning. As beautiful as always ;-)
Magic xxx
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You capture the wondering
You capture the wondering thought as we glimpse each other in passing, so well. And the last stanza is so much more beautiful an image than that of a 'fly on the wall'! Rhiannon
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Hi Tina, this was so
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Tina,
this was so wonderful, it almost reminded me of a
piece from:-
'Shakespere in Love.' or, 'Romeo and Juliet.'
Worded so perfectly.
Jenny.
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Quite beautiful in its
Permalink Submitted by hilary west on
Quite beautiful in its gentle modulations. Much enjoyed SSS.
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Very wistful, Tina. Captures
Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on
Very wistful, Tina. Captures very nicely something that I recognise well. Lovely.
Parson Thru
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A beautiful apparition Tina.
A beautiful apparition Tina. I'd have stopped dead in my tracks too...and stared bad mannerly- but you had the advantage of the window...
;)Pia
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Lovely stuff Tina. The last
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Lovely stuff Tina. The last two stanzas are just about perfect and would even stand alone; really like this.
Chris xx
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