Son et Lumière
By Silver Spun Sand
Mon, 09 Jul 2012
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Gazing up at the stars
he gets to wondering
how many will die
right now, right this second
and how many light-years
would it take before
we’d even notice
they were gone.
Frost, a late one, settles
in the glen, and he sighs
as he tucks the body
of a lamb beneath his arm...
It hadn’t stood a chance,
rejected by its mother;
as if it could help
being born black, or even
as if it mattered.
Back on his patch
the cold and the death
chill his bones,
as an oil lamp flickers
at his kitchen window.
In the distance, towns
like glimmering galaxies
would do their damndest
to consume lorn lights
such as his.
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Fabulous, Tina. You never
Fabulous, Tina. You never fail to make me feel something... and I promise you, it's always good. Loved this.
Much enjoyed, as always.
Trev
PS: Forgot to say... great title, does the whole thing justice.
TVR
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This is really really good
This is really really good Tina - says a mass of things in just a 117 words. Another treasure. :-)
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A vivid picture, Tina. I do
A vivid picture, Tina. I do feel a little bit sorry for those townies. I don't think they all want to drown out his little light!
I have friends who have just lost a lot of lambs, – maybe partly the rain, partly because they for some reason ate more than they usually do of their wheat supplement, it seems. But very sad for them all.
Rhiannon
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Yes, a lovely poem. The
Yes, a lovely poem. The imagery worked so well it made me feel chilly as well as sad for the little lamb tucked under his arm.
Moya
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Hi Tina, I have to say, I
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Hi Tina,
I have to say, I agree with what Stan said.
A poem that really makes you think!
Jenny.
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