Those Were the Days...
By Silver Spun Sand
Sat, 28 May 2011
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There were squeaky
wooden-gates
between backyards –
alleyways
where dogs dozed,
and prams
were parked...
prettily
old union jacks
covered
clapped out
iron-framed mangles
and gossip hung
in the air
like the smell
before rain...
clothes-lines
held up
with wooden props;
dusters and nappies
hand-me-down dresses
headscarves
and pinnies –
Sunday-best linen
vied for space.
Crept through
net-curtained
kitchen windows
the odour
of greens
and roasts
and simmering
damson jelly
till the clothes
were taken in
and the husbands
came home
between backyards
and alleyways
when those
were the days.
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what a lovely old fashioned
what a lovely old fashioned feel - the mangles, my granny had one, we used it to squeeze out the sheets, in the garden in the sunshine - before the line.
it also makes me think of Ena Sharples - who was the complete opposite of Granny who never ever did the curlers...:)
maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!
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Such an atmospheric poem
Such an atmospheric poem Tina- I really loved it. Made me a bit nostalgic about my childhood with alleys and backyards and gossiping matrons. Such a colourful poem.
;)Pia
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Hello Tina, as everyone else
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hello Tina,
as everyone else has said, this is pure nostalgia.
Many memories come flooding back for me, while
reading this beautiful piece.
And as Mary Hopkins sang:- Those were the days my
friend, I wish they'd never end!
Thankyou for the great read.
Jenny.
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I enjoyed it very much also
I enjoyed it very much also and now have Mary Hopkins on repeat in my ear........whatever happened to her I wonder?
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new Silver=Spun-Sand H!.
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new Silver=Spun-Sand
H!. Really good images and description of
the olden days,which you write so well,enjoyed very much. specially the mangle,smoke and pinnies. We had a mangle wringing and used apples to Squeeze through.For homemade wine. No washing machines.No light toilet outside.Night lights for bed.
Do you remember the coalman heave the coal in the
cellar.You certainly can join me in most of the poem.
Second hand clothes. I have The Carnival is over on my mind. Was it The Seekers or The Carpenters. Neil Diamond on again last night.
Have a good week-end.
julie xx
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Lovely read - very evocative
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Lovely read - very evocative Tina.
Overthetop1
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You paint a very appealing
Permalink Submitted by well-wisher on
You paint a very appealing and colourful nostalgic picture full of wonderful images.
It's a world that I never really knew, I'm sorry to say, coming from a middle-class background and not belonging to any kind of community although I do remember women in headscarves.
Funny how headscarves are now mostly associated with muslim women when they used to be a common form of British head-gear back in the 50's/60's/70's
Very much enjoyed your poem. It was very entertaining and a glimpse into a whole
different world for me.
Particularly liked:
and gossip hung
in the air
like the smell
before rain...
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