EBOLOWA 31

By simonmiller15

Tue, 08 Mar 2016
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31

   

A much revised version of EBOLOWA will be on sale in book shops and online at Unbound.com.

Details to follow as and when.

many thanks meantime to readers at ABC

and good luck.

simon

Certificate 18
Story
EBOLOWA
Historical Fiction
Drama
Crime

Comments

Submitted by Sandy Hogarth on

Like the 'turtle' simile.

His name --- hers'. No apostrophe.

Good cut in by Harry

EC with hers. Again no apostrophe

Is it not a bit much of a coincidence tha OC had report on her desk at that time. Need to make the case earlier.

A great section. Lovely tension. Want to read more.

Submitted by simonmiller15 on

thnaks Sandy - - - I'll get those ' straightened out.  Delighted you're hooked.  Hoe you stay hooked because it was partly your comment on the old ending that had me back at the drawing board and pretty much starting again.  I think it's certainly true for thrillers, maybe all novels, that the end writes the beginning and the rest just holds them together.  As soon as your comment sunk in it was bound to be the long haul (again!  after the thrashing of Irran).  Anyway I hope the rewrite sustains the tension (coincidences apart) to the very end.  No fizzle.   

Submitted by simonmiller15 on