Inland Waterways
By skinner_jennifer
Sat, 21 May 2011
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As our barge chugs along
while on deck I sing my song,
a wave we gesture as we pass
to those relaxing on the grass,
the bark of dog I did hear...
while sipping on my ice cold beer,
time to ponder on people I've met
I light a candle so too reflect,
so we moor up for the night,
the bats we see...three take flight,
the gentle flit of many moths
I watch them dance the light across,
as the night is now ours
in dreams we climb up to the stars,
the night is peaceful and tranquil...
with only us two lying still.
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Very dreamy Jenny - i'd love
Very dreamy Jenny - i'd love to go on a narrowboat and explore the canals, lovely book by LTC Rolt describing his journeys with his wife through the inland waterways - think it was aptly called 'Narrowboat'. Thanks for a lovely read. :-)
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I think I just floated away
I think I just floated away on the waterway here for a while Jenny. Very atmospheric
;)Pia
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Absolutely beautiful, I love
Absolutely beautiful, I love these lines;
'the gentle flit of many moths
I watch them dance the light across,'
I did once go boating on the Broads, and it really is sooo peaceful, just like you have described.
If you ever get the chance I would urge you to go!
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Your poems are always taking
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Your poems are always taking me on a journey somewhere. I really liked this poem and you always manage to communicate the wonder of nature.
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