On A Sunday Walk
By Steve Button
Sun, 12 Sep 2010
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An eruption of geese
came yelling off the pond
as if a bomb had dropped.
Too soon for migration,
more like a gang-fight
or playground ruck,
low and startled,
almost in touching range,
I felt the thrum of wings,
the rythmn of release
in the pounding
delirium overhead.
but I would have gone
with the rattled geese
if I could
and battered the air,
knifing a flightpath
in sudden, brutish joy.
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Hi Steve Button, That's some
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Steve Button,
That's some Sunday walk.
Interesting poem.
Jenny.
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the last verse does,
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
the last verse does, definitely. I really liked it Steve
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Really good poem - vivid and
Really good poem - vivid and economical word choice. Enjoyed this.
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I like the 3 verse but I
I like the 3 verse but I think the experience of nature could have done without. It goes to say that a jogger wouldn't hear it even if he/she saw it unless they took the earphones out ;D but it does make the poem special with the 3 verse.
pia
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This is a nice read, I love
Permalink Submitted by tinkerbell9 on
This is a nice read, I love the last paragraph.
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