blue gunpowder starring

By stevepoet

Tue, 31 Jul 2012
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there is slow dynamite
watch
the blue gunpowder starring

flashes and bursts beyond
the road we drive along

in separate cars

it is a shared moment

a controlled
explosion

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Submitted by Sooz006 on
I'm no poet, but does this need come capital letters? I'm asking because I don't know the answer. As to the content, it is a lovely snapshot. watch the blue gunpowder starring... I like this.

 

Submitted by stevepoet on
To be honest, Sooz, it's an old piece I just posted up. I'll try it with some more punctuation and see. And thanks for the like.