Brief Eclipse Of Time

Very true, but hopefully there is a bit of stuff to pad it out a bit in the middle. Your poem and philosophy is brief and to the point. 

A different style to your usual!
Funnily enough I've had this verse I've been tweaking from time to time viewing life as a circle, linking sleepyness of infancy and decline, with a window of opportunity between (like what Bee said above), so in a way I wondered about the last line, seeing it as 'eclipse of brief time', but maybe that is what you were thinking - the brevity of life time which gets soon eclipsed? Rhiannon