He Came Home I.P.
By threeleafshamrock
Sun, 29 May 2011
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He came home,
she met him at the door.
'I knew you would', she said
laying a hand on his cheek.
'Will you not take me in your arms?'
but deep within her heart,
she knew he could not;
those days were past.
She leaned toward him
and felt the coldness.
She hesitated, momentarily,
mouth dry, eyes damp.
A sob escaped, to spite her.
She laid a hand upon his chest,
'I will have one kiss!'
She laid her lips on his,
closing her eyes recalling.
'Welcome home son.'
Someone lit a candle,
as she sat beside him
accepting condolences.
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yes, heartbreaking. one
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
yes, heartbreaking.
one typo: A sob escaped, too spite her. - should be to.
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threeleafshamrock Well I
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
threeleafshamrock
Well I thought too it was so
real and going to say sad.
"Will you not take me in your arms?"
but deep within her heart,
She knew he could not;
those days were past
She leaned towards him
and felt the coldness.
Make a good play don't you think?
all the best for the (IP)
julie xx
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